This kind of underground illness will greatly affect people's life unknowingly because it gradually harms people physically and mentally without distinct and acute symptoms. It is a kind of chronic ill which gradually decays people's health, so most Internet users will not pay attention to the uncomfortableness at first and when they become aware of the situation, they are usually quite ill. This research paper will discuss what the Internet addiction disorder (IAD) is and how IAD affects people mentally and physically and focus on how Taiwanese students understand and consider their Internet usage, whether they think they are healthy or are worried about themselves.
(The above is a part of my first paragraph...)
actually.....I do not quite understand what I am arguing XDDDDD
Ahahah!!!
maybe I know that...
I wanna find out that if Taiwanese students think they are addicted to the Internet, and think it can be a serious problem in the future (like: decrease the future competitiveness etc.) because I think it is a very important issue which definitely affects our lives in some ways.
and I really wanna say that....(many other have the same feeling as I have)
the life in FJU disappoints me coz.....well....well.....
anyway...
it disappoints me!!! XDDD
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Halo~here comes my response:
I think you can show us how people addicted in IAD are "physically and mentally" affected, and in what ways? How IAD decays people's health, decrease the future competitiveness ... and so on. Because in your paragraph, I can't find convincing evidence that support your argument.
Btw,I am looking forward to your rp presentation becoz I'm also interested in this kind of topic. Keep working hard together la~~
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